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OTHER: OTHER: Professor give me some feedback and an example：
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PREVIOUS PAPER INSTRUCTIONS (#507048214): OTHER: OTHER: Professor give me some feedback and an example：
Approaching standards: Revisions include some reassessment of skills, knowledges, scope or scale, or confirm some prior assessment.
Below standards: No project schedule provided, or project schedule not realistic.
Meeting standards:Some relevant research provided or validity of most prior research confirmed. References usually correctly and completely cited.
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Your text has no formatting or paragraph structure making it extremely difficult to read and to determine where you have completed a concept.However there are several places where you seem to write “game” where I think you are trying to talk about “gamer”. Otherwise the sentences would not make any sense.
Approaching standards
New or confirmed project description and goals created, but
sometimes inconsistent with feasibility study. You haven’t exactly provided a feasibility study and analysis. You’ve just restated your project aims.What I was looking for was for you to do these things:
1. describe your project and its goals, 2. explain what makes your project different from the project you researched (specifically DEEP, since that’s the one you talked about before), 3. define any challenges and how you would meet them, 4. verify that with these features, this is a viable project for you as a 12 week Thesis and/or 5. explain what changes to the original idea you would have to what makes your project different from the project you researched (specifically DEEP, since that’s the one you talked about before), 3. define any challenges and how you would meet them, 4. verify that with these features, this is a viable project for you as a 12 week Thesis and/or 5. explain what changes to the original idea you would have to make for it to be viable. Last, you need to provide a rough schedule for the work that you would do in the 12 weeks to verify that the goal is achievable. Or that it’s not, and would require you to scale it down or change it. So, the point is that it would have been OK to come to the conclusion that this idea was too big or difficult for you, or that you would need more time. If you did that, you might then suggest things that you would change so that you *could* use the basic idea for a Thesis. But I see no evidence that you checked the feasibility through your research to figure that out.
COMMENTS FROM PREVIOUS ORDER: PREVIOUS PAPER INSTRUCTIONS (#506238134): Based on last week’s research assignment and the responses you’ve received, you should have asked yourself: is my concept worth pursuing?
In answer, you should have reached one of three decisions. The first, “my idea is strong and fresh”, is what everyone hopes for. But you should be completely convinced that this is the case before you commit to your concept, as you can’t easily revisit that decision later.
You may have decided that the idea has some good points but also some difficulties. Possible issues: it’s too similar to existing content, has too many competitors in its space or is not sufficiently fresh and creative. If your idea would need revisions for you to continue working with it, describe the changes in focus and/or detail that would enable you to move forward. If your idea is clearly over-represented as currently conceived, provide ways you could adapt it to make it more distinctive, or suggest a different idea consistent with your research.
Include as part of this revised assessment whether or not this project is a good fit for you specifically. In other words, is this project feasible as a one-term Thesis project? Do you already have the skills and knowledge required to complete this idea? What topics would you need to become familiar with to understand the content and deliver it effectively? Remember, in this case, it’s OK to assume that you would have content information that would be relevant to your idea if it is directly to the abstract author’s expertise.
If you determine that your original idea is solid but not feasible, analyze the deficiency and explain how you could address it (technical research, new skills, partners, etc.). Could you adapt some aspect of your original idea proposal to minimize the feasibility gap? Could you narrow your focus or trim your deliverables?
And equally important, how much time will it take to bring your idea to completion? Don’t forget that this idea is a Thesis project, not a proposal for a large corporation or entertainment giant.
Post your analysis of last week’s research, your revised idea (or restate the original idea if it was solid as first presented) and your skill, time and resources feasibility assessment.

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